Writing Blockbuster Plots A Step-by-Step Guide to Mastering Plot, Structure, and Scene Martha Alderson Cincinnati, Ohio WRITING BLOCKBUSTER PLOTS. Copyright © 2016 by Martha Alderson. Manufactured in the United States of America. All rights reserved. No part of this book may be reproduced in any form or by any electronic or mechanical means including information storage and retrieval systems without permission in writing from the publisher, except by a reviewer, who may quote brief passages in a review. Published by Writer’s Digest Books, an imprint of F+W Media, Inc., 10151 Carver Road, Suite # 200, Blue Ash, OH 45242. (800) 289-0963. First edition. For more resources for writers, visit www.writersdigest.com/books. Distributed in Canada by Fraser Direct 100 Armstrong Avenue Georgetown, Ontario, Canada L7G 5S4 Tel: (905) 877-4411 Distributed in the U.K. and Europe by F&W Media International Brunel House, Newton Abbot, Devon, TQ12 4PU, England Tel: (+44) 1626-323200, Fax: (+44) 1626-323319 E-mail: [email protected] Distributed in Australia by Capricorn Link P.O. Box 704, Windsor, NSW 2756 Australia Tel: (02) 4577-3555 Acknowledgments I owe a big debt of gratitude to all of the writers that openly shared their need, and often desperation for and resistance to, plot and structure and scene. I may never have self-published the original Blockbuster Plots if not for them, which would never have led to The Plot Whisper and best-selling author status. I know for a fact that A Spiritual Guide for Writers: Secrets of Personal Transformation would have remained hidden and unrealized. I continue to give thanks to Teresa LeYung Ryan and Luisa Adams for their love, generosity, and belief in me. Added gratitude goes to Luisa for her gentle and nurturing nature and a shared belief in the healing power of spirit. Thanks also to the following: Melanie Rigney for being the first person to believe in my approach to teaching writers how to plot, and for believing in me. Thank you for your encouragement when I needed it most. Phil Sexton for his patience and his offer to breathe freshness into the original Blockbuster Plots, which has sent me on a twelve-year journey into the heart of stories, writers, and me. Rachel Randall for taming what often felt like chaos, editing with a brilliant eye for detail, and caring for and vastly improving Blockbuster Plots. Cris Freese for seamlessly stepping in with his support. Writer’s Digest for their endorsement from the very beginning. Thank you for finding merit in my work as early as 2003. There are many to thank in the intervening years between the first Blockbuster Plots and what Writing Blockbuster Plots is today, including the University of Santa Cruz Extension, the California Writers Club, Brian Parker, various writers’ groups, the San Francisco Writing Conference, Jill Corcoran, Adams Media, Peter Archer, Paula Munier, and Jordan Rosenfeld. I am forever grateful to my husband, Bobby Ray Alderson, for his love and protection, for never letting up on me to finish as I labored to bring my original vision of Blockbuster Plots into form, and for his constant and passionate belief in me. About the Author Martha Alderson is known as the Plot Whisperer for her books on plot: The Plot Whisperer: Secrets of Story Structure Any Writer Can Master, The Plot Whisperer Workbook: Step-by-Step Exercises to Help You Create Compelling Stories, The Plot Whisperer Book of Writing Prompts: Easy Exercises to Get You Writing, and Writing Deep Scenes: Plotting Your Story Through Action, Emotion, and Theme (with Jordan Rosenfeld), and for the award-winning blog she manages, The Plot Whisperer, which has been awarded top honors by Writer’s Digest from 2009 to 2015. Martha has been exploring and writing about the Universal Story for the past twenty years as part of the plot support she offers to writers. More recently, she has expanded her work to include helping writers transform their creative lives. She is currently filming two new video programs: The 27-Step Tutorial: How Do I Plot a Novel, Memoir, Screenplay? and A Spiritual Guide for Writers: Secrets of Personal Transformation. Visit her website: marthaalderson.com Contents Title Page Copyright Page Acknowledgments About the Author Introduction to the Revised Edition Introduction Who This Book Is For How to Use This Book Sensory Feedback Examples What to Expect Part One: Plot Planner Introduction: Plotting Is Like Juggling The Plot Planner Chapter One: What Is Plot? Sifting Through the Layers Plot Redefined Other Layers of Plot Chapter Two: How to Use the Plot Planner The Benefits of Using a Plot Planner Formats for the Plot Planner Plotting Above and Below the Lines The Structure of Stories Tips for Creating Plot Chapter Three: Plot Planner Parameters Plan by Scene Plan by Page Count Take a Break Chapter Four: Construct Your Plot Planner The Beginning Create the Plot Planner The End of the Beginning Changing POV Chapter Five: Plot the Beginning Example Plot the Beginning Keep Writing Chapter Six: Plot by Cause and Effect Using Cause and Effect Avoiding Episodic Scenes Linking Scenes Through Chosen Details Example Plotting Nonlinear Stories Plot the Cause and Effect in the Beginning Chapter Seven: Plot the Middle The Anatomy of the Middle Plot the Middle Chapter Eight: Plot the Dramatic Action Dramatic Action vs. Passive Action Test Scenes for Dramatic Action The Pattern of Stories Generating More Dramatic Action Chapter Nine: Plot the Tension and Conflict Avoid Making It Too Easy The Benefits of Taking Risks Add Antagonists to the Plot Planner Introducing Plot Twists Intensifying the Conflict and Tension Chapter Ten: Plot the End The False Summit The True Summit The Light Switches On Plot the End The Resolution The Whole Story Chapter Eleven: Creating the Character Emotional Development Profile Developing Character Emotional Development Character Emotional Development on the Plot