| 500 004 478 413399 808.3 Nob Noble, William. Three rules for writing a novel J DATE DUE AR 1 2 2001 1 MAY 1 3 2002 .JUN 0 2002 h z 'lM #w*L '?. 30 . i n 2 Pi' I .I J I I I - * 1 J I MAR J; '1 EDU" _J Y*" ,n mm ,s SEP l 8 i- I may 0 3 ?NU MI `fH~<Q MSW; MAR 0 I' 2004 .LlH 3 sum U ==._nQ.Q.1 Books by William Noble The Complete Guide to Wn'ter5' Con efrences and Workshops Forest Dale. Vermont 1997 Show, Don' t Tell, Middlebury, Vermont, 1991 Bookbanning in America, Middlebury, Vermont, 1990 Make That Scene, Middlebury, Vermont, 1988 Shut Up!" He Explained, Middlebury, Vermont, 1987 Steal This Plot (with June Noble) Middlebury, Vermont, 1985 The Psychiatric Fix (with June Noble) , New York, 1981 , New York, 1980 The Private Me (with June Noble) How to Live With Other People 's Children (with June Noble, New York, 1978 The Custody Trap (with June Noble), New York, 1975 Books by William Noble Tlw Complete Guide to Writers' Con Orences and Workshops Forest Dale. Vermont 1997 Show, Don' t Tell, Middlebury, Vermont, 1991 Bookbanning in America, Middlebury, Vermont, 1990 Make That Scene, Middlebury, Vermont, 1988 Shut Up!" He Explained, Middlebury, Vermont, 1987 Steal This Plot (with June Noble) Middlebury, Vermont, 1985 The Psychiatric Fix (with _June Noble), New York, 1981 The Private Me (with June Noble), New York, 1980 How to Live With Other Peoples Children (with jure Noble, New York, l9'78 The Custody Trap (with June Noble) , New York, 1975 DAVENPUH I PUBLKJ UBHAf 321 MAIN STFIEET DAVENPORT. IOWA 52801 T h r e e Rules f o r Writing Novel A Guide to Story Development William Noble Paul S. Eriksson. Publisher Forest Dale. Vermont l For David and Nicole Grosvenor © Copyright 1997 by William Noble All rights reserved. No part of this book may be reproduced in any form without permission in writing from Paul S. Eriksson, Published Forest Dale. Vermont 05745 Manufactured in the United States of America 5 4 3 2 1 Library of Congress Cataloging-in-Publication Data Noble. William Three rules for writing a novel: a guide to story development / by William Noble Includes index ISBN 0-8397-8050-8 Authorship. 2. Fiction-Technique. 3. Plots (Drama, novel, etc.) 4. Setting (Literature) 5. Dialogue. I. Title PN218.N64 1997 808.3-dc21 97-18127 Contents Introduction 3 The Eye of the Writer 6 Rule One: What's Happening Structuring the Story 19 Motivating the Story 31 1. Vengeance 31 2. Catastrophe 36 3. Love and Hate 42 4. The Chase 48 5. Grief and Loss 53 6. Rebellion 59 65 7. Betrayal 8. Persecution 71 9. Self-Sacrifice 82 10. Survival 93 11. Rivalry 104 12. Discovery (Quest) 11 5 13. Ambition 127 14. Spicing the Story 140 Contents Rule Two: Where Am I? 1. Setting the Story 158 2. Creating a "Sense of Place" 171 3. How Many Details? 179 4. The Value of an Imperfect Memory 186 5. How Muc h Research? 193 6. Mixing and Matching 201 7. Using Time to Establish the Setting 208 8. Sensory Details, Se n o r y Images 214 9. Conflict / Harmony 221 10. Mood and Atmosphere As Influenced by Physical Description 228 11. The Importance of Tone 235 12. The Nature of Nature 242 13. The Music of Words 249 Rule Three: Who Am I ? 1. Dialogue Is... 257 2. Connecting the Dots 270 3. Suppose We Want to Create Tension 282 4. Would He / She Say That? 294 5. Do I Show. Do I Tell? 306 6. He Says... or Does He? 312 7. Should He Gesture. Too? 319 8. What About Transitions and Flashbacks? 326 9. Suppose I Want to Talk to Myself? 334 10. How Do I Handle Questions and Answers? 342 11. What About Terms of Art and Slang? 349 2. Suppose I Qpen With Dialogue? Suppose I Close? 357 Should I Be Aware of th Rh thm of M Dialogue? 366 y e Y Index 373 Three Rules for Writing a Novel