A LONE EAGLE SCREENWRITI NC GUIDE structure HOW TO RECOGNIZE AND EMULATE FRAMEWOR THE STRUCTURAL OF GREAT FILMS m Linda Cowgill J. Author of WRITING SHORT FILMS Digitized by the Internet Archive 2010 in http://www.archive.org/details/secretsofscreenpOOcowg ,Se> Secrets of Screenplay Structure HOW TO RECOGNIZE AND EMULATE THE STRUCTURAL FRAMEWORKS OF GREAT FILMS LINDA COWCILL J. sill!! lone eagle pii11milc to i««i *J LosAngeles,CA SECRETS OF SCREENPLAY STRUCTURE Howto RecognizeandEmulatethe StructuralFrameworksofGreatFilms Copyright©1999 byLinda Cowgill f. Allrightsreserved.Nopartofthisbookmaybereproducedorutilizedinanyformor byanymeans, electronicormechanical, includingphotocopying, scanning, record- ingorby any information storage andretrieval systemnowknown orhereafterin- vented, without permission in writing from the publisher. 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CONTENTS Acknowledgments v Introduction xi : Chapter 1 The Essence of Dramatic Structure 1 Linear Understanding 3 Chapter 2 The Three-part Nature of Screenplay Structure 5 Study Film: Witness — Act One The Set-up 5 — Act Two The Confrontation 9 — Act Three The Solution 21 Special Notes 25 Chapter 3 Five Key Focal Points 28 Study Film: Risky Business Screenplay Models 28 The Structure of Film Segments 30 — Act One The Set-up 33 — Act Two The Confrontation 35 — Act Three The Solution 39 Special Notes 41 Chapter 4 Characterization's Relationship to Structure 44 Study Film: Casablanca What Characters Want and Need 45 Character Development 48 The Character Arc's Relationship to Plot Structure 50 The Moral Dimension 60 Special Notes 62 vii SECRETS OFSCREENPLAYSTRUCTURE Chapter 5 Theme's Relationship to Structure 64 Study Film: The Piano How Theme Relates to Plot Structure 65 Thematic Unity in Terms of Climax 69 The "Message in the Bottle" 74 Special Notes 75 Chapter 6 The Structure of Plotting 77 Study Film: Chinatown Story and Plot 78 The Role of Conflict 80 The Principles of Action 85 Special Notes 93 Chapter 7 Review 95 Study Film: Quiz Show The Characters: What They Want and What They Need 95 Primary Movements 98 Overall Structure 99 Thematic Unity 105 Special Notes 107 Chapter 8 The Structure of Subplots 108 Study Film: Tootsie The Relationship Between the Main Plot and Subplot 109 The Structure of Subplots 110 Subplots and Character Transformation 115 Special Notes 121 Chapter 9 Structure and the Ensemble Film 123 Study Films: Diner, Parenthood, The Best Years of Our Lives, Grand Hotel Dramatic Unity 124 The Act Two and Three Climaxes 131 viii