Screenwriting in a Digital Era Kathryn Millard Screenwriting in a Digital Era PalgraveStudiesinScreenwriting PalgraveStudiesinScreenwriting isthefirstbookseriestofocusontheacademic studyofscreenwriting.Itseekstopromoteaninformedandcriticalaccountof screenwritingandofthescreenplay,lookingattheconnectionsbetweenwhatis producedandhowitisproduced,withaviewtounderstandingmoreaboutthe diversityofscreenwritingpracticeanditstexts.Thescopeoftheseriesencom- passesarangeofstudyfromthecreationandrecordingofthescreenidea,tothe processesofproduction,tothestructuresthatformandinformthoseprocesses, totheagents,theirbeliefsandthediscoursesthatcreatethosetexts. KathrynMillard SCREENWRITINGINADIGITALERA IanW.Macdonald SCREENWRITINGPOETICSANDTHESCREENIDEA EvaNovrupRedvall WRITINGANDPRODUCINGTELEVISIONDRAMAINDENMARK FromTheKingdomtoTheKilling Screenwriting in a Digital Era Kathryn Millard MacquarieUniversity,Australia ©KathrynMillard2014 Softcover reprint of the hardcover 1st edition 2014 978-0-230-34328-3 Allrightsreserved.Noreproduction,copyortransmissionofthis publicationmaybemadewithoutwrittenpermission. Noportionofthispublicationmaybereproduced,copiedortransmitted savewithwrittenpermissionorinaccordancewiththeprovisionsofthe Copyright,DesignsandPatentsAct1988,orunderthetermsofanylicence permittinglimitedcopyingissuedbytheCopyrightLicensingAgency, SaffronHouse,6–10KirbyStreet,LondonEC1N8TS. Anypersonwhodoesanyunauthorizedactinrelationtothispublication maybeliabletocriminalprosecutionandcivilclaimsfordamages. Theauthorhasassertedherrighttobeidentifiedastheauthorofthiswork inaccordancewiththeCopyright,DesignsandPatentsAct1988. 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Contents ListofFigures vi Acknowledgements vii Introduction 1 1 ThePictureStorytellers:FromPadtoiPad 9 2 PostCourier12 28 3 TheNewThreeRsofDigitalWriting:Record,Reenact andRemix 42 4 14LessonsonScreenwritingfromErrolMorris 63 5 Adaptation:WritingasRewritingandTheLostThing 77 6 DegreesofImprovisation 97 7 ImprovisingReality 118 8 ComposingtheDigitalScreenplay 136 9 Collaboration:WritingthePossible 158 Conclusion:SustainableScreenwriting 178 Notes 186 SelectBibliography 212 Index 224 v Figures 0.1 Parklands,1996,Toi-ToiPictures 2 1.1 TheBootCake,2008,CharlieProductions 10 2.1 TravellingLight,2003,Toi-ToiPictures 30 2.2 District9,2009,Tri-StarPictures 39 3.1 Patience(AfterSebald),2012,IlluminationFilms 54 3.2 Keyholecollage,GuyMaddin 59 5.1 Parklands,1996,Toi-Toipictures 78 5.2 TheLostThing (storyboardsketch),PassionPictures 86 6.1 PuttyHill,2010,HamiltonFilmGroup 112 6.2 PushManCart,2005,NoruzFilms 114 7.1 Ajami,2009,InosanProductions 119 8.1 TheGleanersandI,2000,CineTamaris 139 8.2 JourneytotheEndofCoal,2008,SamuelBollendorff 152 8.3 JourneytotheEndofCoal,2008,SamuelBollendorff 153 8.4 JourneytotheEndofCoal,2008,SamuelBollendorff 153 8.5 JourneytotheEndofCoal,2008,SamuelBollendorff 155 9.1 BeastsoftheSouthernWild,2012,Court13Pictures 164 9.2 MadDetective,2009,MilkyWayImageCompany 169 vi Acknowledgements Iamgratefultomanyforsupport,encouragementandadviceoverthe last three years. To my colleagues Iqbal Barkat, Maree Delofski, Peter Doyle, Marcus Eckermann, Gill Ellis, Mark Evans, Pat Grant, Bridget Griffith-Foley, Julian Knowles, Tom Murray, John Potts and Kate Ross- manith in the Department of Media, Music, Communications and Cultural Studies at Macquarie University; to Alex Munt at the Univer- sity of Technology, Sydney; to Paul Wells at Loughborough University; to Adam Ganz at Royal Holloway, University of London and to David Carlin and Leo Berkeley at RMIT, Melbourne. Special thanks to Adrian Martin – whose presentation at the ‘Cinematic Scriptwriting’ Sympo- siumweorganisedattheMuseumofSydneyprovedinspirational–and to screenwriter Keith Thompson from whom I have learnt much over theyearsinhisroleasscripteditoronsomeofmyprojects. Thanks to research assistant Mikael Peck for all his patient work in helping to prepare the manuscript and to Tom Roberts who also contributedtothisstage. ThankstotheFacultyoftheArtsatMacquarieUniversityforfunding forsupportformanuscriptpreparation. Many thanks to my fellow Series Editors Steven Maras and Ian Macdonald for their support and advice. My sincere thanks to Com- missioning Editor Felicity Plester for all her support and advice and to Chris Penfoldfrom Palgrave for his work in helpingbring this book to print. I am especially grateful to Samuel Bollendorff, Guy Maddin, Yaron Shani, Shaun Tan and Au Kin Ye for providing insights into their respectiveworkviaemailandSkypeinterviews. SpecialthankstoJ.J.Murphy,whonotonlyprovidedexcellentadvice aseditorofthisbook,butwithwhomIhavemaintainedadialogueon ‘all things independent screenwriting’ since we first encountered each other’sworkviatheScreenwritingResearchNetworkin2007. Lastly, special thanks to my partner and fellow writer, Noëlle Janaczewska, for her insightful comments and suggestions on drafts throughouttheproject. vii viii Acknowledgements An earlier version of Chapter 2 ‘Post Courier 12’ was published as ‘After the Typewriter: Screenwriting in a Digital Era’, Journal of Screenwriting,Volume1,Number1,1January2010,pp.11–25. Permissions 3.2CollagebyGuyMaddinforhisfilmKeyhole(2012)reproducedwith kindpermissionofGuyMaddin. 5.2ShaunTan’sstoryboardsketchforTheLostThing (2010)reproduced bykindpermissionofSophieByrneandPassionPictures. 6.1 Sophie Toporkoff’s production still of the cast of Putty Hill (2010) reproducedbykindpermissionofMatthewPorterfieldandtheHamilton FilmGroup. 8.1,8.2,8.3,8.4PhotographsfromJourneytotheEndofCoal(2008)pho- tographedbySamuelBollendorffandreproducedbykindpermissionof SamuelBollendorff. Introduction Oneofmyfavouritepartsoffilmmakingiscarryingoutlocation‘recces’. Some begin as a door knock in a targeted neighbourhood. That is how the producer and I found the main location for our short feature Parklands(1996),1setinthesuburbsofAdelaideinthemid-1990s.Asthe thermometer topped 30 degrees Celsius, we walked down street after streetinSemaphore,aworking-classsuburbbythebeach,andpersuaded peopletoinviteusinandshowusthroughtheirhomes.Eventually,we foundabungalowconstructedfromredbrickintheperiodofausterity that followed World War Two. Renovated with a layer of pink stucco in the 1970s, it was a perfect fit for one of the film’s central characters (Figure0.1). Flash-forwardnearlyadecade.AproductiondesignerandIspentday afterdaydrivingthroughexpansesofsemi-desertsaltbushontheedge of Adelaide, looking for a key location for my feature Travelling Light (2003).2Aswedroveintothestate’sscorching,dryinterior,thesunlight created a heat haze in the distance. It added to the sense of moving through a timeless, ever-shifting landscape. We eventually settled on a small town called Wild Horse Plains. Although it was close to our pro- ductionbaseattheSouthAustralianFilmCorporation,itappearedtobe intheproverbial‘middleofnowhere’. Ithasoftenbeenobservedthatmakingafilmislikegoingtowar,and filmmakers initially borrowed the notion of ‘recceing’ or reconnoitring from their military counterparts. When wars were fought by troops on theground,smallunitsweresentaheadtocheckoutthelieoftheland. Theirtaskwastogatherasmuchinformationaspossibleabouttheter- rain ahead and identify any potential obstacles. Smaller units had the advantageofbeingflexibleandfastmoving.Ifthereconnaissancereport wasfavourable,thenthemilitary’smainforcescouldbemobilised. 1