LANGUAGE AND LITERACY SERIES Dorothy S. Strickland, FOUNDING EDITOR Celia Genishi and Donna E. Alvermann, SERIES EDITORS ADVISORY BOARD: Richard Allington, Kathryn Au, Bernice Cullinan, Colette Daiute, Anne Haas Dyson, Carole Edelsky, Shirley Brice Heath, Connie Juel, Susan Lytle, Timothy Shanahan ReWRITING the Basics: A Call to Creativity Literacy Learning in Children’s Cultures LUKE REYNOLDS ANNE HAAS DYSON Literacy and Justice Through Photography Writing Instruction That Works: WENDY EWALD, KATHERINE HYDE, & LISA LORD Proven Methods for Middle and High School Classrooms The Successful High School Writing Center ARTHUR N. APPLEBEE & JUDITH A. LANGER, WITH KRISTEN CAMPBELL WILCOX, MARC NACHOWITZ, DAWN FELS & JENNIFER WELLS, EDS. MICHAEL P. MASTROIANNI, AND CHRISTINE DAWSON Interrupting Hate Literacy Playshop: New Literacies, Popular Media, MOLLIE V. BLACKBURN and Play in the Early Childhood Classroom Playing Their Way into Literacies KAREN E. WOHLWEND KAREN E. WOHLWEND Critical Media Pedagogy: Teaching Literacy for Love and Wisdom Teaching for Achievement in City Schools ERNEST MORRELL, RUDY DUEÑAS, VERONICA GARCIA, JEFFREY D. WILHELM & BRUCE NOVAK & JORGE LOPEZ Overtested A Search Past Silence: The Literacy of Young Black Men JESSICA ZACHER PANDYA DAVID E. KIRKLAND Restructuring Schools for Linguistic Diversity, Second Edition The ELL Writer: Moving Beyond Basics in the Secondary Classroom OFELIA B. MIRAMONTES, ADEL NADEAU, & NANCY L. COMMINS CHRISTINA ORTMEIER-HOOPER Words Were All We Had Reading in a Participatory Culture: MARÍA DE LA LUZ REYES, ED. Remixing Moby-Dick in the English Classroom Urban Literacies HENRY JENKINS & WYN KELLEY, WITH KATIE CLINTON, JENNA VALERIE KINLOCH, ED. MCWILLIAMS, RICARDO PITTS-WILEY, AND ERIN REILLY, EDS. Bedtime Stories and Book Reports Summer Reading: Closing the Rich/Poor Achievement Gap CATHERINE COMPTON-LILLY & STUART GREENE, EDS. RICHARD L. ALLINGTON & ANNE MCGILL-FRANZEN, EDS. Envisioning Knowledge Real World Writing for Secondary Students: JUDITH A. LANGER Teaching the College Admission Essay and Other Envisioning Literature, Second Edition Gate-Openers for Higher Education JESSICA SINGER EARLY & MEREDITH DECOSTA JUDITH A. LANGER Teaching Vocabulary to English Language Learners Writing Assessment and the Revolution in MICHAEL F. GRAVES, DIANE AUGUST, Digital Texts and Technologies & JEANNETTE MANCILLA-MARTINEZ MICHAEL R. NEAL Literacy for a Better World: Artifactual Literacies The Promise of Teaching in Diverse Schools KATE PAHL & JENNIFER ROWSELL LAURA SCHNEIDER VANDERPLOEG Educating Emergent Bilinguals Socially Responsible Literacy: OFELIA GARCíA & JO ANNE KLEIFGEN Teaching Adolescents for Purpose and Power (Re)Imagining Content-Area Literacy Instruction PAULA M. SELVESTER & DEBORAH G. SUMMERS RONI JO DRAPER, ED. Learning from Culturally and Linguistically Change Is Gonna Come Diverse Classrooms: Using Inquiry to Inform Practice PATRICIA A. EDWARDS, GWENDOLYN THOMPSON MCMILLON, & JOAN C. FINGON & SHARON H. ULANOFF, EDS. JENNIFER D. TURNER Bridging Literacy and Equity When Commas Meet Kryptonite ALTHIER M. LAZAR, PATRICIA A. EDWARDS, & MICHAEL BITZ GWENDOLYN THOMPSON MCMILLON Literacy Tools in the Classroom "Trust Me! I Can Read" RICHARD BEACH, GERALD CAMPANO, BRIAN EDMISTON, SALLY LAMPING & DEAN WOODRING BLASE & MELISSA BORGMANN Reading Girls Harlem on Our Minds HADAR DUBOWSKY MA'AYAN VALERIE KINLOCH Reading Time Teaching the New Writing CATHERINE COMPTON-LILLY ANNE HERRINGTON, KEVIN HODGSON, & CHARLES MORAN, EDS. (continued) For volumes in the NCRLL Collection (edited by JoBeth Allen and Donna E. Alvermann) and the Practitioners Bookshelf Series (edited by Celia Genishi and Donna E. Alvermann), as well as a complete list of titles in this series, please visit www.tcpress.com. LANGUAGE AND LITERACY SERIES (continued) Critical Encounters in High School English, Room for Talk Second Edition REBEKAH FASSLER DEBORAH APPLEMAN Give Them Poetry! Children, Language, and Literacy GLENNA SLOAN CELIA GENISHI & ANNE HAAS DYSON The Brothers and Sisters Learn to Write Children's Language ANNE HAAS DYSON JUDITH WELLS LINDFORS “Just Playing the Part” The Administration and Supervision of Reading Programs, CHRISTOPHER WORTHMAN Fourth Edition The Testing Trap SHELLEY B. WEPNER & DOROTHY S. STRICKLAND, EDS. GEORGE HILLOCKS, JR. “You Gotta BE the Book,” Second Edition Inquiry Into Meaning JEFFREY D. WILHELM EDWARD CHITTENDEN & TERRY SALINGER, WITH ANNE M. BUSSIS No Quick Fix RICHARD L. ALLINGTON & SEAN A. WALMSLEY, EDS. “Why Don’t They Learn English?” LUCY TSE Children's Literature and Learning BARBARA A. LEHMAN Conversational Borderlands Storytime BETSY RYMES LARWRENCE R. SIPE Inquiry-Based English Instruction Effective Instruction for Struggling Readers, K–6 RICHARD BEACH & JAMIE MYERS BARBARA M. TAYLOR & JAMES E. YSSELDYKE, EDS. The Best for Our Children The Effective Literacy Coach MARÍA DE LA LUZ REYES & JOHN J. HALCÓN, EDS. ADRIAN RODGERS & EMILY M. RODGERS Language Crossings Writing in Rhythm KAREN L. OGULNICK, ED. MAISHA T. FISHER What Counts as Literacy? Reading the Media MARGARET GALLEGO & SANDRA HOLLINGSWORTH, EDS. RENEE HOBBS Beginning Reading and Writing teachingmedialiteracy.com DOROTHY S. STRICKLAND & LESLEY M. MORROW, EDS. RICHARD BEACH Reading for Meaning What Was It Like? BARBARA M. TAYLOR, MICHAEL F. GRAVES, LINDA J. RICE & PAUL VAN DEN BROEK, EDS. Research on Composition Young Adult Literature and the New Literary Theories PETER SMAGORINSKY, ED. ANNA O. SOTER The Vocabulary Book MICHAEL F. GRAVES Literacy Matters Powerful Magic ROBERT P. YAGELSKI NINA MIKKELSEN Children’s Inquiry New Literacies in Action JUDITH WELLS LINDFORS WILLIAM KIST Close to Home Teaching English Today JUAN C. GUERRA BARRIE R.C. BARRELL ET AL., EDS. Life at the Margins Bridging the Literacy Achievement Gap, 4–12 JULIET MERRIFIELD ET AL. DOROTHY S. STRICKLAND & DONNA E. ALVERMANN, EDS. Literacy for Life Out of This World HANNA ARLENE FINGERET & CASSANDRA DRENNON HOLLY VIRGINIA BLACKFORD Critical Passages The Book Club Connection KRISTIN DOMBEK & SCOTT HERNDON SUSAN I. MCMAHON & TAFFY E. RAPHAEL, EDS., ET AL. Making Race Visible Until We Are Strong Together STUART GREENE & DAWN ABT-PERKINS, EDS. CAROLINE E. HELLER The Child as Critic, Fourth Edition Writing Superheroes GLENNA SLOAN ANNE HAAS DYSON LANGUAGE AND LITERACY SERIES (continued) Critical Encounters in High School English, Room for Talk Second Edition REBEKAH FASSLER DEBORAH APPLEMAN Give Them Poetry! Children, Language, and Literacy GLENNA SLOAN CELIA GENISHI & ANNE HAAS DYSON The Brothers and Sisters Learn to Write Children's Language ANNE HAAS DYSON ReWRITING JUDITH WELLS LINDFORS “Just Playing the Part” The Administration and Supervision of Reading Programs, CHRISTOPHER WORTHMAN Fourth Edition The Testing Trap SHELLEY B. WEPNER & DOROTHY S. STRICKLAND, EDS. GEORGE HILLOCKS, JR. “You Gotta BE the Book,” Second Edition the Basics Inquiry Into Meaning JEFFREY D. WILHELM EDWARD CHITTENDEN & TERRY SALINGER, WITH ANNE M. BUSSIS No Quick Fix RICHARD L. ALLINGTON & SEAN A. WALMSLEY, EDS. “Why Don’t They Learn English?” LUCY TSE Children's Literature and Learning BARBARA A. LEHMAN Conversational Borderlands Storytime BETSY RYMES Literacy Learning in LARWRENCE R. SIPE Inquiry-Based English Instruction Effective Instruction for Struggling Readers, K–6 RICHARD BEACH & JAMIE MYERS BARBARA M. TAYLOR & JAMES E. YSSELDYKE, EDS. The Best for Our Children Children’s Cultures The Effective Literacy Coach MARÍA DE LA LUZ REYES & JOHN J. HALCÓN, EDS. ADRIAN RODGERS & EMILY M. RODGERS Language Crossings Writing in Rhythm KAREN L. OGULNICK, ED. MAISHA T. FISHER What Counts as Literacy? Reading the Media MARGARET GALLEGO & SANDRA HOLLINGSWORTH, EDS. RENEE HOBBS Beginning Reading and Writing teachingmedialiteracy.com DOROTHY S. STRICKLAND & LESLEY M. MORROW, EDS. RICHARD BEACH Reading for Meaning WhaLtIN WDAa Js . ItR LICiEke? &BA PRBAAURL AV MAN. DTAEYNL OBRR,O MEKI,C HEADESL. F. GRAVES, Anne HAAs Dyson Research on Composition Young Adult Literature and the New Literary Theories PETER SMAGORINSKY, ED. ANNA O. SOTER The Vocabulary Book MICHAEL F. GRAVES Literacy Matters Powerful Magic ROBERT P. YAGELSKI NINA MIKKELSEN Children’s Inquiry New Literacies in Action JUDITH WELLS LINDFORS WILLIAM KIST Close to Home Teaching English Today JUAN C. GUERRA BARRIE R.C. BARRELL ET AL., EDS. Life at the Margins Bridging the Literacy Achievement Gap, 4–12 JULIET MERRIFIELD ET AL. DOROTHY S. STRICKLAND & DONNA E. ALVERMANN, EDS. Literacy for Life Out of This World HANNA ARLENE FINGERET & CASSANDRA DRENNON HOLLY VIRGINIA BLACKFORD Critical Passages The Book Club Connection KRISTIN DOMBEK & SCOTT HERNDON SUSAN I. MCMAHON & TAFFY E. RAPHAEL, EDS., ET AL. Making Race Visible Until We Are Strong Together STUART GREENE & DAWN ABT-PERKINS, EDS. CAROLINE E. HELLER Teachers College, Columbia University The Child as Critic, Fourth Edition Writing Superheroes New York and London GLENNA SLOAN ANNE HAAS DYSON Portions of this book were drawn from earlier, partial analyses of research data. Those analyses appeared as: Dyson, A. Haas. (2010). Writing childhoods under construction: Revisioning “copying” in early childhood. Journal of Early Childhood Literacy, 2010, 10, 7–31. Copyright 2010 by SAGE Publications. Used with permission. Dyson. A. Haas. (2008). The Pine Cone Wars: Studying writing in a community of children. Language Arts, 85, 305–315. Copyright 2008 by the National Council of Teachers of English. Used with permission. Dyson, A. Haas. (2008). Staying in the (curricular) lines: Practice constraints and possibilities in childhood writing. Written Communication, 25, 119–159. Copyright 2008 by SAGE Publications. Used with permission. Dyson, A. Haas. (2007). School literacy and the development of a child culture: Written remnants of the “gusto of life.” In D. Thiessen & A. Cook-Sather (Eds.), International handbook of student experiences in elementary and secondary school (pp. 115–142). Dordrecht, The Netherlands: Kluwer. Copyright 2007 by Springer. Used with permission. Dyson, A. Haas. (2006). On saying it right (write): “Fix-its” in the foundations of learning to write. Research in the Teaching of English, 41, 8–44. Copyright 2006 by the National Council of Teachers of English. Used with permission. Published by Teachers College Press, 1234 Amsterdam Avenue, New York, NY 10027 Copyright © 2013 by Teachers College, Columbia University All rights reserved. No part of this publication may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means, electronic or mechanical, including photocopy, or any information storage and retrieval system, without permission from the publisher. Library of Congress Cataloging-in-Publication Data Dyson, Anne Haas. ReWRITING the basics : literacy learning in children’s cultures pages cm. — (Language and literacy series) Includes bibliographical references and index. ISBN 978-0-8077-5455-9 (pbk. : alk. paper) ISBN 978-0-8077-5456-6 (hardcover : alk. paper) 1. Language arts (Elementary)—United States. 2. English language— Social aspects—United States. I. Title. LB1576.D974 2013 372.6—dc23 2013014800 ISBN 978-0-8077-5455-9 (paper) ISBN 978-0-8077-5456-6 (hardcover) Printed on acid-free paper Manufactured in the United States of America 20 19 18 17 16 15 14 13 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 For Celia Genishi, in appreciation of years of friendship Contents Preface xi Acknowledgments xv 1. The “Basics” and Society’s Children: Cases of Classroom Writing 1 On Metaphoric Mailboxes and Textual Playgrounds: Basic Critiques 4 Neighborhood Drives: Places for Childhoods Past and Present 9 PART I: BASIC LeSSoNS ANd BASIC TeNSIoNS 2. Welcome to Writing Workshop 25 The Classroom as Community: Working (and Playing) Together 26 The Basics and the Official Writing Lives of Young Children 33 Wide-Awake Children and Blinds-Shut Basics 41 3. Looking Good and Sounding “Right”: Fix-Its 43 Kindergarten Fix-Its: Where Do Written Stories Come From? 46 1st-Grade Fix-Its: Whose Voice Is That? 59 The Basics in a Symbol-Mediated, Voice-Filled World 67 vii viii Contents 4. The ethics of Writing: on Truth and ownership 69 “A Real Story About You” (The You That Is Not Spider-Man) 70 Your Own Story (The One That Is Not Copied) 75 Writing a Life Story (Or Writing in a Social Life?) 78 A Change in Angle of Vision 80 PART II: WRITING “BASICS” IN ChILdhood SPACeS 5. Shifting expectations and differing ethics: entering Childhood Cultures 87 Relational Fix-Its: “Put My Name in There!” 89 Organizing and Enacting Relationships: “Can I Play?” 94 A Caution About Developmental Order 97 6. Collegial Relations and Coordinated Actions: Textual handclaps 99 Written Language and the Mediation of Childhood Cultures 100 The Relational Landscape for Textual Play: Situating Old Basics in Child Spaces 111 7. Complementary Relations and Improvisational Play: on Matters of Birthdays, Love, and War 113 Complementary Relations and Birthday Parties 115 Complementary Relations and Their Lack: The Complex Game of Love 122 From Complementary Relations to Collaborative Improvisations: The Pine Cone Wars 135 The Basic Dramas of Children’s Textual Play 142 8. Performers on a Movable Stage: on the Malleability of Voice and Image 143 Storytelling: Communicative Resources and Social Stages 145 Contents ix Rhyming and Singing: New Written Venues for Play and Performance 157 On Child Performers 160 9. Re-Imagining Writing Basics for Contemporary Childhoods 162 Contextualizing the Basics 164 Toward a Re-Envisioned Basic Education 174 So, What Do You Think? 178 Appendix A. Reflections on Methods 180 Situating Teachers 180 Copying the Children 181 Constructing Analytic Narratives 183 Appendix B. demographic Tables 185 Table B.1. Sex and Ethnicity of Mrs. Kay’s Children 185 Table B.2. Sex and Ethnicity of Mrs. Bee’s Children 186 References 187 Index 197 About the Author 206