Table of Contents Praise Title Page Copyright Page Dedication Epigraph AUTHOR’S WARNING Acknowledgements Introduction Chapter 1 - IT’S TIME TO AWAKEN IN THE BEGINNING WAS THE TRANCE HYPNOTIC WRITING Chapter 2 - STOP! DO THIS FIRST Chapter 3 - WHAT IS IMPOSSIBLE? Chapter 4 - A DISCLAIMER Chapter 5 - A BEGINNING PULL UP A CHAIR AND Chapter 6 - AGATHA CHRISTIE PROVES HYPNOTIC WRITING EXISTS Chapter 7 - MY SECRET TO HYPNOTIC WRITING Chapter 8 - YOU CAN’T EVEN BRIBE ME TO READ A LOUSY LETTER! Chapter 9 - WHAT IS HYPNOTIC WRITING? Chapter 10 - HYPNOTIC WRITING: A CASE STUDY Chapter 11 - THE GREAT INTIMACY SECRET Chapter 12 - WHAT’S MORE IMPORTANT THAN COPY? Chapter 13 - HYPNOTIC WRITING CONTROLLED STUDY Chapter 14 - HOW I LEARNED THE SECRET OF HYPNOTIC WRITING Chapter 15 - WHAT IS HYPNOSIS? Chapter 16 - TWO WAYS TO CAUSE ACTION PROBLEM PROMISE PROOF PRICE MY UPDATED FORMULA MOTIVATION WITHOUT PAIN Chapter 17 - WHAT ABOUT YOUR WEB SITE? PROMISE PROOF PRICE Chapter 18 - HOW LONG IS TOO LONG? Chapter 19 - WHAT EVERY READER WANTS TO KNOW Chapter 20 - THE HYPNOTIC POWER OF REPETITION SCENE ONE SCENE TWO Chapter 21 - THE INNER GAME OF HYPNOTIC WRITING SELF ONE: THE CRITIC SELF TWO: THE MASTER WRITER Chapter 22 - IMITATION SUGAR IS SWEET, TOO! Chapter 23 - HOW TO JUMP-START THE MUSE Chapter 24 - HOW TO NAIL YOUR READER’S ATTENTION Chapter 25 - HOW TO MAKE YOUR WRITING WALK, TALK, AND BREATHE USE A THESAURUS USE A SIMILE BOOK USE A BOOK OF ANALOGIES USE A BOOK OF QUOTES Chapter 26 - GIVE ME SOME MEAT! Chapter 27 - A WRITING LESSON FROM THE WORLD’S GREATEST HYPNOTIST Chapter 28 - ELECTRIFYING TIPS FOR CREATING BREAKTHROUGH WRITING SEE THE EVENTS WRITE TO ONE PERSON GET EXCITED GET TO THE POINT DON’T JUDGE Chapter 29 - A CASE AGAINST PERFECTION Chapter 30 - HOW TO PERSUADE READERS TO YOUR SIDE KNOW WHAT YOU WANT EMOTIONAL APPEAL GIVE THEM WHAT THEY WANT ASK QUESTIONS THAT LEAD TO YOUR SIDE USE WORD PICTURES USE TESTIMONIALS REMIND THEM OF THE PROBLEM AND YOUR SOLUTION ADD A P.S. BE VISUALLY ATTRACTIVE BE SOLD ON WHAT YOU’RE SELLING Chapter 31 - WARP SPEED EDITING SECRETS WORTH KILLING FOR CUT OFF THEIR HEADS CUT OFF THEIR FEET CUT OUT EVERY SIXTH WORD TAKE STEPHEN KING’S ADVICE GET SOMEONE TO READ IT OUT LOUD TO YOU READ IT OUT LOUD GET FREE HELP TAKE A BREAK CUT AND PASTE REMEMBER KISSINGER ONE LAST WORD Chapter 32 - HOW TO MAKE YOUR WRITING SEXY FOUR WAYS TO MAKE YOUR WRITING MORE INVITING Chapter 33 - HOW PEOPLE THINK Chapter 34 - HOW TO CREATE HYPNOTIC STORIES Chapter 35 - HOW TO CONTROL THE “COMMAND CENTER” INYOUR PROSPECT’S MIND Chapter 36 - THE ONE HYPNOTIC COMMAND THAT ALWAYS WORKS Chapter 37 - WHAT I LEARNED FROM THE SEA WOLF Chapter 38 - YOUR TURNING POINT MESSAGE Chapter 39 - WHAT EVERYONE WILL ALWAYS READ Chapter 40 - YOUR CONNOTATION IS SHOWING Chapter 41 - WHAT ARE MY SECRETS FOR WRITING HYPNOTIC SELLING STORIES? Chapter 42 - HYPNOTIC BLOGGING Chapter 43 - REMINDERS AS TRIGGERS Chapter 44 - HOW TO CHANGE AVERAGE WRITING INTO HYPNOTIC WRITING Chapter 45 - 30 WAYS TO WRITE A HYPNOTIC HEADLINE HOW TO TEST YOUR HEADLINE Chapter 46 - HYPNOTIC OPENINGS 13 PSYCHOLOGICAL COPY CONNECTORS USING THE TIPS Chapter 47 - HYPNOTIC QUIZ Chapter 48 - MY THREE BIGGEST SECRETS I DON’T DO THE WRITING I DIALOGUE IN MY MIND I PLUG IN HYPNOTIC LANGUAGE Chapter 49 - HOW MUCH IS THAT DOGGIE IN THE WINDOW? Chapter 50 - HOW TO CHANGE PERCEPTION THE MIND IS EASILY TRICKED Chapter 51 - AT LAST! THE JOE VITALE HYPNOTIC WRITING FORMULA INTENTION RESEARCH CREATION REWRITE TESTING Chapter 52 - A NEW HYPNOTIC COPY CHECKLIST Chapter 53 - THE FIVE SECRET LAWS OF HYPNOTIC PERSUASION Chapter 54 - THE SEVEN MOST HYPNOTIC BOOKS OF ALL TIME Chapter 55 - THE HYPNOTIC WRITING FORMULA Chapter 56 - YOUR CHALLENGE Appendix - HYPNOTIC E-MAILS BIBLIOGRAPHY INDEX ABOUT DR. JOE VITALE HOW CAN YOU EASILY BECOME A MORE POWERFUL HYPNOTIC WRITER? “The principles of hypnosis when applied to copywriting add a new spin to selling. Joe Vitale has taken hypnotic words to set the perfect sales environment and then shows us how to use those words to motivate a prospect to take the action you want. This is truly a new and effective approach to copywriting, which I strongly recommend you learn. It’s pure genius.” —Joseph Sugarman, author, Triggers “Wow—Hypnotic Writing kept me awake last night! I planned to read for 15 minutes or so before going to sleep and ended up turning out the light when I noticed it was past 3 A.M. That’s how powerful this book is. Sure, Joe gives you a world class education in the writing of copy itself, but that’s just a start. What you really get is a deep understanding of how people think, feel, and act—yourself included. This knowledge is priceless in turning words into power, and ethically using that power to sell more of what you offer.” —Bob Serling, www.DirectMarketingInsider.com “I’ve read countless books on persuasion, but none comes close to this one in showing you exactly how to put your readers into a buying trance that makes whatever you are offering them irresistible.” —David Garfinkel, author, Advertising Headlines that Make You Rich “I am a huge fan of Joe Vitale and his books, and Hypnotic Writing , first published more than 20 years ago, is my absolute favorite. Updated with additional text and fresh examples, especially from e-mail writing, Joe’s specialty Hypnotic Writing is the most important book on copywriting (yes, that’s really what it is about) to be published in this century. Read it. It will make you a better copywriter, period.” —Bob Bly, copywriter “I couldn’t put this book down. It’s eye-opening and filled with genuinely new stuff about writing and persuading better. And it communicates it brilliantly and teaches it brilliantly—exemplifying the techniques by the writing of the book itself as you go along.” —David Deutsch, author, Think Inside the Box (www.thinkinginside.com) “Hypnotic Writing is packed with so much great information it’s hard to know where to start. The insights, strategies and tactics in the book are easy to apply yet deliver one heck of a punch. And in case there’s any question how to apply them, the before and after case studies drive the points home like nothing else can. Hypnotic Writing is not just about hypnotic writing. It IS hypnotic writing. On the count of three, you’re going to love it. Just watch and see.” —Blair Warren, author, The Forbidden Keys to Persuasion “Hypnotic Writing has it all. It shows you how to master and accomplish the three things you need from your prospects. Attention! Captivation! Action! Never before has there been such a treasure trove of techniques for writing magnetic copy. Hypnotic Writing can be used immediately. It’s an incredible desk reference tool. This is not a book you read and put up on the shelf for 20 years. It’s on your desk where you can use it every day. I love Hypnotic Writing and I refer to it more often all the time. Joe Vitale is the world’s first true and pure hypnotic marketer and this book will only bolster that fact. You will learn how to write headlines, openings, the power of perception change, and yes even secret laws of persuasion. I love this book. I encourage you to get your copy today and keep it away from your competitors.” —Kevin Hogan, Psy.D., author, The Psychology of Persuasion and The Science of Influence Copyright © 2007 by Hypnotic Marketing, Inc. All rights reserved. Published by John Wiley & Sons, Inc., Hoboken, New Jersey. Published simultaneously in Canada. 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