A Scientific Approach to Scientific Writing · John Blackwell Jan Martin A Scientific Approach to Scientific Writing 123 JohnBlackwell JanMartin Sees-editingLtd Sayer-MartinLtd Weston-super-mare,BS232JU,UK Aberaeron,SA460HS,UK [email protected] [email protected] ISBN978-1-4419-9787-6 e-ISBN978-1-4419-9788-3 DOI10.1007/978-1-4419-9788-3 SpringerNewYorkDordrechtHeidelbergLondon LibraryofCongressControlNumber:2011926358 ©SpringerScience+BusinessMedia,LLC2011 Allrightsreserved.Thisworkmaynotbetranslatedorcopiedinwholeorinpartwithoutthewritten permission of the publisher (Springer Science+Business Media, LLC, 233 Spring Street, New York, NY10013,USA),exceptforbriefexcerptsinconnectionwithreviewsorscholarlyanalysis.Usein connectionwithanyformofinformationstorageandretrieval,electronicadaptation,computersoftware, orbysimilarordissimilarmethodologynowknownorhereafterdevelopedisforbidden. 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Printedonacid-freepaper SpringerispartofSpringerScience+BusinessMedia(www.springer.com) Acknowledgements This book would probably not have been written without suggestions and encouragement by Jianquan Liu (Professor of Molecular Ecology, Lanzhou University,China)andXuxiaZhao(InternationalCoordinator,NorthwestInstitute ofPlateauBiology,ChineseAcademyofSciences).Inaddition,valuablecomments have been made at various points in its writing by Dr. David Blackwell (Organic Chemistry, Cambridge), Elena Conti (Professor of Systematic Botany, University of Zürich, Switzerland), Prof. Anna Linusson (Department of Chemistry, Umeå University,Sweden),Prof.ThomasMoritz(HeadofDepartmentofForestGenetics and Plant Physiology, SLU, Sweden), Prof. Michal Otyepka (Head of Department ofPhysicalChemistry,PalackyUniversity,CzechRepublic),Prof.GöranSandberg (Executive Director, Knut and Alice Wallenberg Foundation, Sweden), Dr. Johan Sandberg (Department of Informatics, Umeå University, Sweden), Prof. Ian Scott (IBERS,AberystwythUniversity,UK),Prof.BoStrandberg(SahlgrenskaAcademy atUniversityofGothenburg),Dr.Jan-OlovWeslien(Skogforsk,Sweden)andProf. MikeYoung(IBERS,AberystwythUniversity,UK). Thanks are also due to Joëlle Hoggan, Jon Sayer and Eveline Forrest (Forrest Text)fortheirhelpatvariousstagesofwritingthisbook. v ThisisBlankPageIntegra vi Contents 1 MaximizingChancesofPublication . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 1 2 EssentialStepsBeforeWritingaPaper . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 3 2.1 GatherYourNotes . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 3 2.2 FindSomewhereQuiet . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 3 2.3 SelectivelyReviewtheLiterature . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 4 2.4 IdentifyaTargetJournal . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 5 2.5 AwarenessofLinguisticLimitations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 6 2.6 DefiningandDelimiting‘theStudy’. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 8 References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 11 3 DraftingPapers . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 13 3.1 ArrangingtheInformation . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 13 3.2 TheTitleandAbstract . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 14 3.2.1 HypotheticalCaseStudy1 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 15 3.2.2 HypotheticalCaseStudy2 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 18 3.3 TheIntroduction . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 19 3.3.1 HypotheticalCaseStudy1 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 20 3.3.2 HypotheticalCaseStudy2 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 22 3.4 TheMaterials&MethodsSection . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 26 3.4.1 HypotheticalCaseStudy1 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 28 3.4.2 HypotheticalCaseStudy2 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 28 3.5 TheResultsSection . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 30 3.5.1 HypotheticalCaseStudy1 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 30 3.5.2 HypotheticalCaseStudy2 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 31 3.6 TheDiscussionandConclusion(s). . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 31 3.6.1 CombinedResults&DiscussionSections . . . . . . . . . 34 3.6.2 FurtherRemindersofNovelty . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 36 3.7 Anomalies . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 36 3.8 AStrategyforDealingwithMajorLimitations . . . . . . . . . . 38 3.9 FiguresandTables . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 39 3.10 ReferenceFormattingSystems . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 41 References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 42 vii viii Contents 4 ComplexStudies . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 43 4.1 HypotheticalCaseStudy3 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 43 4.1.1 TheRationale,ObjectivesandFindings . . . . . . . . . . 45 4.1.2 TitleandAbstract . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 47 4.1.3 Introduction . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 47 4.1.4 Materials&Methods . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 50 4.1.5 Results . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 51 4.1.6 Discussion . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 51 4.1.7 Conclusion . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 52 4.2 HypotheticalCaseStudy4 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 53 4.2.1 TheRationale,ObjectivesandFindings . . . . . . . . . . 55 4.2.2 TitleandAbstract . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 56 4.2.3 Introduction . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 57 4.2.4 Materials&Methods . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 59 4.2.5 Results . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 59 4.2.6 Discussion . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 60 4.2.7 Conclusion(s) . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 61 4.2.8 IncorporatedSub-headings . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 62 5 LinguisticPoints . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 63 5.1 Jargon . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 63 5.2 Tenses . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 64 5.3 ActiveandPassiveVoices . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 67 5.3.1 PracticalConsiderations . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 72 5.4 Unnecessary‘Weak’Verbs . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 72 5.5 NarrativeFlowandCoherentArguments . . . . . . . . . . . . . 72 5.5.1 TheOverallPaper . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 73 5.5.2 SectionsofPapers . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 73 5.5.3 ParagraphsandSentences . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 74 5.6 PlagiarismandAcceptableUsesofOtherAuthors’Works . . . . 75 References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 76 6 CoveringLettersandReferees’Objections . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 77 6.1 TheCoveringLetter . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 77 6.1.1 HypotheticalCaseStudy1 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 78 6.1.2 HypotheticalCaseStudy2 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 78 6.2 TheReviewProcess . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 79 6.3 AnticipatingObjections . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 81 6.3.1 AnticipatingObjectionsWhilePlanningaStudy . . . . . 81 6.3.2 AnticipatingObjectionsWhileExecutingaStudy . . . . 81 6.3.3 Anticipating Objections While Preparing andWritingaPaper . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 82 6.3.4 AnticipatingObjectionsAfterSubmittingaPaper . . . . 83 6.4 AfterReceivingtheEditor’sDecision . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 84 6.4.1 AcceptanceWithoutRevision . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 84 6.4.2 AcceptancewithMinorRevisions . . . . . . . . . . . . . 85 Contents ix 6.4.3 AcceptancewithMajorRevisions . . . . . . . . . . . . . 86 6.4.4 OutrightRejection . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 93 References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 94 7 OtherKindsofWrittenScientificCommunication . . . . . . . . . . 95 7.1 ElectronicCommunications . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 95 7.2 OtherCommunications . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 98 7.3 Reviews . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 98 References . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 103 8 Summary . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 105 SubjectIndex . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . 107