" I did like [the avatars] because they helped me to understand [the material] better. Thank you for fi nding w"ays to help those of us who need a little extra help. —LaTricia Scott, Central Texas College [ [ Scott is single and in his mid-thirties. He is taking care of his father, who was di- agnosed with lung cancer. Scott is taking prerequisite classes for a radiologic tech- nology program. In his spare time, Scott enjoys BMX racing. ➧ Scott [ [ Vickie is in her mid-fi fties, and is return- ing to school to earn a counseling degree so that she can work as a substance abuse counselor. She is outgoing and enjoys volunteering, such as delivering meals to the elderly and working with at- risk teens. ➧ Vickie [ [ Zach is a recent high school graduate, and is very much a skater. He’s always listening to his iPod, with his skate- board by his side. He is a fi rst-year college student and is still exploring his " options. ➧ I liked them all. 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This book is printed on acid-free paper. 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 DOC / DOC 0 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 Student Edition: Instructor’s Edition ISBN: 978-0-07-337168-9 ISBN: 978-0-07-740420-8 MHID: 0-07-337168-8 MHID: 0-07-740420-3 Vice President and Editor in Chief: Michael Ryan Design Manager and Cover Designer: Publisher: David S. Patterson Preston Thomas Senior Sponsoring Editor: John Kindler Photo Researcher: Emily Tietz Director of Development: Dawn Groundwater Buyer: Tandra Jorgensen Developmental Editor: Linda Stern Digital Product Manager: Janet Smith Senior Marketing Manager: Jaclyn Elkins Media Project Managers: Bethuel Jabez and Editorial Coordinator: Jesse Hassenger Maria Betancourt Production Editors: Aaron Downey and Composition: 11/13 Times by Aptara®, Inc. Brett Coker Printing: 45# New Era Thin by R.R. Donnelley Production Service: Matrix Productions, Inc. & Sons Credits: The credits section for this book begins on page 779 and is considered an extension of the copyright page. Library of Congress Cataloging-in-Publication Data Langan, John, 1942– English skills with readings / John Langan.—8th ed. p. cm. Includes bibliographical references and index. ISBN-13: 978-0-07-337168-9 (acid-free paper) ISBN-10: 0-07-337168-8 (acid-free paper) 1. English language—Rhetoric. 2. English language— Grammar. 3. College readers. I. Title. PE1408.L3182 2011 808’.0427—dc22 2010048315 The Internet addresses listed in the text were accurate at the time of publication. The inclusion of a Web site does not indicate an endorsement by the authors or McGraw-Hill, and McGraw-Hill does not guarantee the accuracy of the information presented at these sites. www.mhhe.com Contents Readings Listed by Rhetorical Mode xv Preface xxi PART 1: Basic Principles of Effective Writing 1 1 An Introduction to Writing 2 All rights reserved. U Benndeefir ststa onfd iPnagr aPgorianpt ha nWdr iStiunpgp o8rt 3 mpanies, Inc. W Wrriittiinngg aass aa SPkroilcl es8s of Discovery 10 Co Keeping a Journal 11 Hill Graw- Using This Text 13 Mc © 2012 The 2 T Prheew rWitirnigti ng1 6P rocess 15 Copyright Writing a Topic Sentence and Preparing a Scratch Outline 23 Writing a First Draft 25 Revising 27 Editing 30 Review Activities 32 3 The First and Second Steps in Writing 48 Step 1: Begin with a Point 49 Step 2: Support the Point with Specifi c Evidence 51 Reinforcing Point and Support 55 The Importance of Specifi c Details 58 The Importance of Adequate Details 62 Practice in Making and Supporting a Point 64 vii viii Contents 4 The Third Step in Writing 86 Step 3: Organize and Connect the Specifi c Evidence 87 Practice in Organizing and Connecting Specifi c Evidence 98 5 The Fourth Step in Writing 108 Step 4: Write Clear, Error-Free Sentences 109 Revising Sentences 109 Editing Sentences 125 Practice in Revising Sentences 127 Using Parallelism 128 Using a Consistent Point of View 130 Using Specifi c Words 131 Using Concise Wording 133 Varying Your Sentences 134 6 Four Bases for Revising Writing 139 Base 1: Unity 140 Base 2: Support 142 Base 3: Coherence 144 Base 4: Sentence Skills 147 Practice in Using the Four Bases 151 PART 2: Paragraph Development 167 7 Introduction to Paragraph Development 168 Important Considerations in Paragraph Development 169 Tips on Using a Computer 173 Using Peer Review 176 Doing a Personal Review 177 Patterns of Paragraph Development 178 8 Exemplifi cation 180 9 Process 196 10 Cause and Effect 212 11 Comparison or Contrast 226 Contents ix 12 Defi nition 247 13 Division-Classifi cation 261 14 Description 275 15 Narration 293 16 Argument 307 17 Additional Paragraph Assignments 323 PART 3: Essay Development 335 18 Writing the Essay 336 All rights reserved. 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P Plraancntiicneg inth We rEitsisnagy th3e4 9E ssay 352 Hill Co Essay Assignments 360 w- Gra Mc © 2012 The PART 4: Research Skills 369 Copyright 19 U Ussiinngg tthhee L Libibrarrayr y 3a7n1d the Internet 370 Using the Internet 379 20 Writing a Research Paper 386 Step 1: Select a Topic That You Can Readily Research 387 Step 2: Limit Your Topic, Make the Purpose of Your Paper Clear, and Assess Your Audience 388 Step 3: Gather Information on Your Limited Topic 390 Step 4: Plan Your Paper and Take Notes on Your Limited Topic 390 Step 5: Write the Paper 394 Step 6: Use an Acceptable Format and Method of Documentation 394 Model Paper 401 x Contents PART 5: Handbook of Sentence Skills 411 Sentence-Skills Diagnostic Test 412 SECTION 1: Grammar 418 21 Subjects and Verbs 419 A Simple Way to Find a Subject 419 A Simple Way to Find a Verb 419 More about Subjects and Verbs 420 22 Sentence Sense 424 What Is Sentence Sense? 424 Turning On Your Sentence Sense 424 Summary: Using Sentence Sense 426 23 Fragments 427 What Are Fragments? 428 Dependent-Word Fragments 428 -ing and to Fragments 432 Added-Detail Fragments 435 Missing-Subject Fragments 438 24 Run-Ons 443 What Are Run-Ons? 444 Correcting Run-Ons 445 25 Standard English Verbs 457 Regular Verbs: Dialect and Standard Forms 458 Three Common Irregular Verbs: Dialect and Standard Forms 461 26 Irregular Verbs 466 A Brief Review of Regular Verbs 467 List of Irregular Verbs 467 27 Subject-Verb Agreement 475 Words between Subject and Verb 476 Verb before Subject 477 Compound Subjects 478 Indefi nite Pronouns 479